TheoriginalBW's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Suppressed Emotions 3]

Cool

Hey, first of all that was a pretty neat toon. I think you're a great artist, your drawings were pretty detailed. However I think you need to work on some of your basic animation skills, I myself have taken time out from posting until i've gotten a little more work. Do some research on "the 12 basic principles of animation"

[Bully Victim Bystander]

Cool

Hey, i thought it was pretty cool. Nice recreation of that show tom goes to the mayor. Anywho, the sound was kinda poor quality, do some refining on ur next one to get it smoother and that would make the whole thing seem waaaay more profesional.

[Self-Portrait]

cool

yea i agree, a bit queer, too short, but obviously that style would be hard to make a longer toon

[littleFoot]

Rediculous-

-ly awesome.
I think you've improved, and so have your characters. I love how sometimes we meet a character and you don't really develop them. They're like a stranger. Then you introduce us to them in later animations.
Bitey being afraid of spiders was definately a humorous addition to his personality, and man, is he a lil ol bastard or what, always causing trouble.
Can't wait for your next one!

[The Sorrow]

I hated it

Pretty lame, you need to think of something funny. its ok that you had really simple animation, but really simple and really short isn't entirely captivating. Also, the hat that was obviously a picture of a hat didn't fit in very well.

Mobbsy responds:

well you certainy don't mince your words my friend. did you see which very famous fast food joint it was that was closed? and how it was a joke on people's dependance on fast food? if you enjoy exploding heads then the stick figures collection is that-a-way!

[Chamber Of Seasons]

funny

pretty good, though spring and autumn should've been given more credit, i mean come on dude, they're life and death, thats way better than fire and ice.

RubberNinja responds:

For a second time. Who said they're dead :D?

[Lilium]

Awesome story.

Really nice story. Nice little bit of dark poetry.